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Mentoring and the Internet, by Ted Nellen

Another teacher to student:

(name), your page is very beautiful!  It caught my eye right away
and actually encouraged me to read all of your selections  My
husband and I are teachers  I am home with the kids; he is at
Seward Park HS  My criticism is this:  while your writing is well
thought out, you are presenting work that can be accessed
internationally  Watch your spelling/proofread  You might also
want to form your paragraphs in such a way so that they are easy
to read  You and your classmates are invited to go to
http://shakti.trincoll.edu/~bpeery/NYC.html.
This is one page I keep
returning to  Good luck and congratulate your teacher for putting
together such a cleverly integrated program.

(name)